3 September 2026 · Age Split, r4

ProShield headgear.
Launch + two follow-ups, coded.

Latest round revises the Age Split layout: new headline, two new athletes (a heavyweight senior in black, a youth wrestler in white), plain ProShield Black / ProShield White labels, and corrected callouts — four-point venting, five adjustable straps, and a durable chin strap snap in place of the crown-C. The coded Mailchimp draft below still carries the earlier approved look.

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The three coded emails

All in Mailchimp as drafts

Every link in all three points at cmpsportswear.com/custom-quote/. Live text throughout, images hosted on Mailchimp, unsubscribe and address merge tags in each footer.

ProShield launch email

The sequence

  • Launch — "Same mat room. New headgear smell." Overhead hero, One Vendor / One Order band, Five Straps / One Standard diagram, chin cups. To WRESTLING_COACH + AD_MENS + AD_WOMENS.
  • Clicked → 2 days → "Fits your lightweights. Fits your heavyweights." (the ProShield two-up design).
  • Opened, no click → 4 days → "Want a number for your roster?"
  • Spec copy corrected in the launch diagram: five adjustable vinyl straps, four-point venting, durable chin strap snap. The comp still had the old four-straps / five-point / crown-C labels.
Download the launch email
Design rounds — for reference
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The Age Split, revised

3 September 2026 · current

Every note applied: Fits your lightweights. Fits your heavyweights., two newly generated athletes, labels reduced to the product name and colorway, and the spec counts fixed to four-point venting and five adjustable straps. The crown-C callout is gone, replaced by Durable chin strap snap — Snap, strap, unsnap.

The Age Split, revised

This round

  • Heavyweight now looks straight at the camera with a snarl.
  • Both wrestlers wear the real chin hardware — the flat vinyl strap threaded through the wide soft cushion pad, not the chin cup. The product chin-strap shot was fed in as a reference.
  • Detail tiles 1 and 2 re-cut tight at the original native contrast to match the crops you sent. If you want your exact files used, drop them in Drive under CLAUDE_ASSETS / CMPSW_MARKETING / EMAIL_DESIGNS / HEADGEAR / ASSETS and I will swap them in — I cannot pull images out of chat as files.
  • Marks placed by the same rule on both cups.
Download the revision
Coded email & earlier rounds
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The Coded Email

Mailchimp draft · proof-matched · ready to send

What the coaches will receive, now matching the proof: headline and $40 box sit on the photo (a bulletproof background image with live text on top, VML for Outlook), the One Vendor band with the order-sheet widget, numbered spec callouts with teal leaders either side of the product, your chin-cup line. Live text throughout, images hosted on Mailchimp, unsubscribe + address merge tags.

Final approved mockup

Links

  • Draft in Mailchimp: ProShield Headgear - Coach Launch
  • Production HTML (proof-matched): hg-email-b.html — headline and price box on the photo, numbered leaders around the product.
  • Buttons go to the custom-quote form; price box and product go to the retail ProShield page; chin cups to the chin-cup page.
  • Before you hit Send: Mailchimp likes to auto-fill a send time and an automatic resend — glance at both.
Download final mockup
Round 7 — for reference
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Your Crop

Round 7

Hero is the crop from your PSD, not an approximation — read straight off the crop layer's transparent window. Both faces and both headgear are fully clear: headline sits bottom-left in the empty black, the teal $40 box sits top-right on the singlet. Band, order-sheet widget, numbered spec sheet and chin-cup block unchanged from Round 6.

Round 7 — Your Crop

Notes

  • Headline placement is the only judgment call: with this crop the top-left is the white headgear, so the headline went to the lower-left. If you want it top-left like your comp, it will sit over the white cup — say so and I'll scrim it.
  • Price box top-right; could also sit under the headline if you prefer the top clean.
Download Your Crop
Round 6 — for reference
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The Polish

Round 6

Layout is yours from the last pass. Header padding trimmed; hero at 600×600 with the tight crop and the white price box bottom-left (teal $40, "Available in black and white / Bulk pricing available"). One Vendor band on black with a short teal rule, white headline, gray copy, and a small order-sheet widget — singlets, warm-ups, bags checked, ProShield Headgear highlighted "New — add it" — above the teal button. Spec callouts numbered 01–05. Chin cup: your line, with a small teal "$7 · Black or white" tag.

Round 6 — The Polish

Small things added

  • Order-sheet widget in the band — turns "one order" into something you can see.
  • Numbered callouts (01–05) on the spec sheet for a more technical read.
  • Teal rule + $ superscript on the price box; teal accent rule above the band headline.
  • Kept as you wrote them: "Ready To Strap Up!" and "We got ya covered."
Download The Polish
Round 5 — for reference
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The Studio

Round 5

Same photo and pose as Round 4. Chin-cup strap on the black headgear is now black; both faces were nudged so it reads as two different athletes; the crowd is gone — the pair is cut out and set on a dark studio gradient with a soft contact shadow. Band and chin-cup block restyled per your notes.

Round 5 — The Studio

What changed

  • Hero: black chin-cup strap · faces subtly altered · studio backdrop instead of crowd. A version with the original faces (strap fixed, studio backdrop) is one message away if the alteration went too far.
  • One Vendor band: black ground, teal headline, gray subtext, teal Strap Up My Team.
  • Chin cup: Team chin cup? with a teal $7 tag in the card's top-left corner; price out of the body copy.
Download The Studio
Round 4 — for reference
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The Retrofit

Round 4

Your photo, edited — not regenerated. The bottom wrestler's headgear is replaced with the black ProShield (black chin cup, white straps); the top wrestler gets the white ProShield with the real crown-C composited on. Everything else in the frame is the original file. Hero runs 600×500 to hold both faces and the arms like your draft did.

Round 4 — The Retrofit

What changed

  • Hero: your Elite 8 photo with our headgear on both athletes. An alternate exists with only the bottom wrestler's headgear swapped (top athlete bare-headed, as shot).
  • Price: white flag in the image area, bottom-right — $40 / Black or white / Bulk pricing available. Out of the teal band, which is back to its original height.
  • Chin cup: kicker Add-ons → big black Team chin cup. → "$7. Black or white. Snaps onto any ProShield."
Download The Retrofit
Round 3 — for reference
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The Room

Round 3

Same structure as Look 1. New hero built to the reference: straight overhead, the two athletes filling the frame, practice-room mat, no bleachers. Black ProShield on the left athlete, white on the right with the real crown-C composited on. Price now sits in the teal band; the spec-sheet stays as it was.

Round 3 — The Room

What changed

  • Hero: regenerated to the reference — tight, top-down, room, face up. Four variants were run; this was the closest. The alternate is one message away.
  • Price: "$40 · Per headgear · Black or white · Bulk pricing available" inside the One Vendor band. The three-column bar (and "OSFA") is gone.
  • Chin cup: kicker "Team chin cup?" → Add a chin cup. $7. → "Black or white. Snaps onto any ProShield."
Download The Room
Round 2 — for reference
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The Scramble

Round 2 · Cliff's structure, polished

The scene from the draft, rebuilt: two new athletes (one in black ProShield, one in white) tangled up at a dual, headline moved to the bottom so neither headgear is covered. Teal One Vendor band with Strap Up My Team (the draft's energy, minus the exclamation mark — house style), then the spec sheet with the black shell, the $40 price bar, and the spare chin cups.

Round 2 Look 1 — The Scramble

Notes

  • Hero is generated (Nano Banana Pro on the real product shots) — the original action photo was not in the Drive folder, so this is the "recreate the scene" option. Drop the original in HEADGEAR/ASSETS and the retrofit version gets built on it.
  • Headline kept as written, set in house punctuation: two beats, two periods.
  • Chin cups use the cutouts Cliff added to the Drive folder, on a white card so the white one reads.
Download Look 1
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The Face-Off

Round 2 · same structure, bigger hero

Collar tie at center mat, both ear cups square to the camera — black shell on the left, white on the right, real crown-C on both. Black One Vendor band with a teal Add Headgear To My Order, the spec sheet on the white shell, chin cups as two cards, and a second button at the close.

Round 2 Look 2 — The Face-Off

Notes

  • Both colorways in one frame — the hero does the "black or white" line by itself.
  • Two CTAs (band + close). If that's one too many, the closing button drops.
  • Kicker reads "Look closer" here; "The devil is in the details" is on Look 1 — either fits either.
Download Look 2
Round 1 — for reference
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The Spec Sheet

Product-forward · technical

Leads with the hardware. The black shell floats on white with teal leader lines calling out five real features, then the pitch, then a hard three-column price bar and the two athletes side by side. Shortest of the three and the most "this is a piece of equipment, here is what it does."

Concept A — The Spec Sheet

Why it works

  • Callouts do the selling. Five specs read in about four seconds without anyone reading a paragraph.
  • Price bar is unmissable. $40 / 2 colorways / one size, on one line.
  • Shortest scroll — least risk of Gmail clipping when it becomes real HTML.
  • Weakness: the least emotional of the three. No athlete above the fold.
Download A
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The Room

Editorial · photo-led

Opens on a full-bleed high school athlete with the headline scrimmed over the bottom. The pitch names the actual problem in a coach's room — twenty kids in five different brands — then four colon-fragment specs, both colorways, and the youth athlete on the close. The most emotional of the three and the one that reads least like a catalog.

Concept B — The Room

Why it works

  • The hero earns the open. A face in a real room beats a product on white in the inbox preview.
  • "Held together with a shoelace" is the line a coach recognizes from his own room.
  • Colorway cards present black and white as a choice, not an afterthought.
  • Weakness: longest of the three. Needs a tight preheader so the fold still sells.
Download B
C

The Age Split

Montage · grid

Black headline band, then the varsity athlete and the youth athlete hard against each other, then a four-tile macro grid of the real product photography. Built for the coach who runs both a varsity room and a feeder program — one shell, one size, one order form.

Concept C — The Age Split

Why it works

  • The split hero does the whole argument in one image: same product, both ends of the roster.
  • Macro grid uses the real close-ups — gloss, vents, straps, crown-C — so nothing is illustrated.
  • Widest order: youth clubs and feeder programs are the volume nobody is emailing.
  • Weakness: four macro tiles is a lot of image weight for one email.
Download C

Before this gets coded

Everything in these mockups is real: the product photos are yours, the specs come off the live product record, and $40 / $7 / one-size are the live retail prices. Six things I need from you.

  1. Which concept? A, B, C, or a hybrid — the spec-sheet stage from A drops into B or C cleanly.
  2. Can ProShield be decorated with team art? We have proofs of printed headgear on Cliff Keen shells (Purdue). If ProShield takes a team logo, that is the strongest hook we have for coaches and it is deliberately missing from all three until you confirm it.
  3. Is $40 the number coaches see? Or is that retail and there is a team/roster tier that should be on the email instead.
  4. Launch language. A currently says "new this season." If there is a real drop date or a season deadline, that is a better line.
  5. The two athlete photos are generated (Nano Banana Pro, built on your actual product shots, with the real crown-C composited back in). Fine to ship, or do you want a real shoot?
  6. Where does the button go? The custom-quote form, or the retail product page.