ProShield headgear. Launch + two follow-ups, coded.
Latest round revises the Age Split layout: new headline, two new athletes (a heavyweight
senior in black, a youth wrestler in white), plain ProShield Black / ProShield White labels, and corrected
callouts — four-point venting, five adjustable straps, and a durable chin strap snap in place of the crown-C.
The coded Mailchimp draft below still carries the earlier approved look.
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The three coded emails
All in Mailchimp as drafts
Every link in all three points at cmpsportswear.com/custom-quote/. Live text throughout,
images hosted on Mailchimp, unsubscribe and address merge tags in each footer.
The sequence
Launch — "Same mat room. New headgear smell." Overhead hero, One Vendor / One Order band, Five Straps / One Standard diagram, chin cups. To WRESTLING_COACH + AD_MENS + AD_WOMENS.
Clicked → 2 days → "Fits your lightweights. Fits your heavyweights." (the ProShield two-up design).
Opened, no click → 4 days → "Want a number for your roster?"
Spec copy corrected in the launch diagram: five adjustable vinyl straps, four-point venting, durable chin strap snap. The comp still had the old four-straps / five-point / crown-C labels.
Every note applied: Fits your lightweights. Fits your heavyweights., two newly generated
athletes, labels reduced to the product name and colorway, and the spec counts fixed to four-point venting and five
adjustable straps. The crown-C callout is gone, replaced by Durable chin strap snap — Snap, strap, unsnap.
This round
Heavyweight now looks straight at the camera with a snarl.
Both wrestlers wear the real chin hardware — the flat vinyl strap threaded through the wide soft cushion pad, not the chin cup. The product chin-strap shot was fed in as a reference.
Detail tiles 1 and 2 re-cut tight at the original native contrast to match the crops you sent. If you want your exact files used, drop them in Drive under CLAUDE_ASSETS / CMPSW_MARKETING / EMAIL_DESIGNS / HEADGEAR / ASSETS and I will swap them in — I cannot pull images out of chat as files.
What the coaches will receive, now matching the proof: headline and $40 box sit on the photo (a
bulletproof background image with live text on top, VML for Outlook), the One Vendor band with the order-sheet widget,
numbered spec callouts with teal leaders either side of the product, your chin-cup line. Live text throughout, images
hosted on Mailchimp, unsubscribe + address merge tags.
Hero is the crop from your PSD, not an approximation — read straight off the crop layer's transparent
window. Both faces and both headgear are fully clear: headline sits bottom-left in the empty black, the teal $40 box
sits top-right on the singlet. Band, order-sheet widget, numbered spec sheet and chin-cup block unchanged from Round 6.
Notes
Headline placement is the only judgment call: with this crop the top-left is the white headgear, so the headline went to the lower-left. If you want it top-left like your comp, it will sit over the white cup — say so and I'll scrim it.
Price box top-right; could also sit under the headline if you prefer the top clean.
Layout is yours from the last pass. Header padding trimmed; hero at 600×600 with the tight crop and the
white price box bottom-left (teal $40, "Available in black and white / Bulk pricing available"). One Vendor band on black
with a short teal rule, white headline, gray copy, and a small order-sheet widget — singlets, warm-ups, bags checked,
ProShield Headgear highlighted "New — add it" — above the teal button. Spec callouts numbered 01–05. Chin cup: your line,
with a small teal "$7 · Black or white" tag.
Small things added
Order-sheet widget in the band — turns "one order" into something you can see.
Numbered callouts (01–05) on the spec sheet for a more technical read.
Teal rule + $ superscript on the price box; teal accent rule above the band headline.
Kept as you wrote them: "Ready To Strap Up!" and "We got ya covered."
Same photo and pose as Round 4. Chin-cup strap on the black headgear is now black; both faces were nudged
so it reads as two different athletes; the crowd is gone — the pair is cut out and set on a dark studio gradient with a soft
contact shadow. Band and chin-cup block restyled per your notes.
What changed
Hero: black chin-cup strap · faces subtly altered · studio backdrop instead of crowd. A version with the original faces (strap fixed, studio backdrop) is one message away if the alteration went too far.
One Vendor band: black ground, teal headline, gray subtext, teal Strap Up My Team.
Chin cup:Team chin cup? with a teal $7 tag in the card's top-left corner; price out of the body copy.
Your photo, edited — not regenerated. The bottom wrestler's headgear is replaced with the black ProShield
(black chin cup, white straps); the top wrestler gets the white ProShield with the real crown-C composited on. Everything
else in the frame is the original file. Hero runs 600×500 to hold both faces and the arms like your draft did.
What changed
Hero: your Elite 8 photo with our headgear on both athletes. An alternate exists with only the bottom wrestler's headgear swapped (top athlete bare-headed, as shot).
Price: white flag in the image area, bottom-right — $40 / Black or white / Bulk pricing available. Out of the teal band, which is back to its original height.
Chin cup: kicker Add-ons → big black Team chin cup. → "$7. Black or white. Snaps onto any ProShield."
Same structure as Look 1. New hero built to the reference: straight overhead, the two athletes
filling the frame, practice-room mat, no bleachers. Black ProShield on the left athlete, white on the right with the
real crown-C composited on. Price now sits in the teal band; the spec-sheet stays as it was.
What changed
Hero: regenerated to the reference — tight, top-down, room, face up. Four variants were run; this was the closest. The alternate is one message away.
Price: "$40 · Per headgear · Black or white · Bulk pricing available" inside the One Vendor band. The three-column bar (and "OSFA") is gone.
Chin cup: kicker "Team chin cup?" → Add a chin cup. $7. → "Black or white. Snaps onto any ProShield."
The scene from the draft, rebuilt: two new athletes (one in black ProShield, one in white)
tangled up at a dual, headline moved to the bottom so neither headgear is covered. Teal One Vendor band with
Strap Up My Team (the draft's energy, minus the exclamation mark — house style), then the spec sheet
with the black shell, the $40 price bar, and the spare chin cups.
Notes
Hero is generated (Nano Banana Pro on the real product shots) — the original action photo was not in the Drive folder, so this is the "recreate the scene" option. Drop the original in HEADGEAR/ASSETS and the retrofit version gets built on it.
Headline kept as written, set in house punctuation: two beats, two periods.
Chin cups use the cutouts Cliff added to the Drive folder, on a white card so the white one reads.
Collar tie at center mat, both ear cups square to the camera — black shell on the left,
white on the right, real crown-C on both. Black One Vendor band with a teal Add Headgear To My Order,
the spec sheet on the white shell, chin cups as two cards, and a second button at the close.
Notes
Both colorways in one frame — the hero does the "black or white" line by itself.
Two CTAs (band + close). If that's one too many, the closing button drops.
Kicker reads "Look closer" here; "The devil is in the details" is on Look 1 — either fits either.
Leads with the hardware. The black shell floats on white with teal leader lines calling
out five real features, then the pitch, then a hard three-column price bar and the two athletes side by
side. Shortest of the three and the most "this is a piece of equipment, here is what it does."
Why it works
Callouts do the selling. Five specs read in about four seconds without anyone reading a paragraph.
Price bar is unmissable. $40 / 2 colorways / one size, on one line.
Shortest scroll — least risk of Gmail clipping when it becomes real HTML.
Weakness: the least emotional of the three. No athlete above the fold.
Opens on a full-bleed high school athlete with the headline scrimmed over the bottom.
The pitch names the actual problem in a coach's room — twenty kids in five different brands — then four
colon-fragment specs, both colorways, and the youth athlete on the close. The most emotional of the
three and the one that reads least like a catalog.
Why it works
The hero earns the open. A face in a real room beats a product on white in the inbox preview.
"Held together with a shoelace" is the line a coach recognizes from his own room.
Colorway cards present black and white as a choice, not an afterthought.
Weakness: longest of the three. Needs a tight preheader so the fold still sells.
Black headline band, then the varsity athlete and the youth athlete hard against each
other, then a four-tile macro grid of the real product photography. Built for the coach who runs both
a varsity room and a feeder program — one shell, one size, one order form.
Why it works
The split hero does the whole argument in one image: same product, both ends of the roster.
Macro grid uses the real close-ups — gloss, vents, straps, crown-C — so nothing is illustrated.
Widest order: youth clubs and feeder programs are the volume nobody is emailing.
Weakness: four macro tiles is a lot of image weight for one email.
Everything in these mockups is real: the product photos are yours, the specs come off the live
product record, and $40 / $7 / one-size are the live retail prices. Six things I need from you.
Which concept? A, B, C, or a hybrid — the spec-sheet stage from A drops into B or C cleanly.
Can ProShield be decorated with team art? We have proofs of printed headgear on Cliff Keen shells
(Purdue). If ProShield takes a team logo, that is the strongest hook we have for coaches and it is
deliberately missing from all three until you confirm it.
Is $40 the number coaches see? Or is that retail and there is a team/roster tier that should be
on the email instead.
Launch language. A currently says "new this season." If there is a real drop date or a season
deadline, that is a better line.
The two athlete photos are generated (Nano Banana Pro, built on your actual product shots, with
the real crown-C composited back in). Fine to ship, or do you want a real shoot?
Where does the button go? The custom-quote form, or the retail product page.