1 September 2026 · Round 4

Momentum Fleece Hoodie.
Option C, cleaned up.

Built on the direction you picked. The hood close-up leads in full studio light with the subject on the right, MOMENTUM small over FLEECE HOODIE big across the top, and the game-day / weigh-in line under it. A mockup button sits directly under the hero, the fit band and the macro panel are gone, and the Zoom In board is re-mapped. Whole email on black, 2,457px long, 12 KB, five images.

Live text · not sliced 12 KB html · no Gmail clip Brand marks audited Mobile stacked at 520px
C

The email

dark run · 2,457px
Option C round 4, full length

Your notes, and what each became

Hero imageSubject moved right and fully in frame. Source re-cropped past the softbox, seam blended. Full light, no shadow fade.
Hero typeMOMENTUM small in teal, FLEECE HOODIE at 50px, then Stylish enough for game day. Built to cut the last couple pounds before weigh-ins. Purpose line removed.
HeaderNEW in a teal square, then To The Momentum Line with the underline, where the line name used to sit.
Call to actionGet My Free Mockup directly under the hero, with "Free. In 48 hours. No commitment." beside it. Second button still at the bottom.
IntroThe "after weigh-ins" sentence is gone. Now: Premium casual wear, durable enough for combat. Structured collar, performance fleece, tapered laser-cut cuffs, and a design customized to your team's style.
Zoom InFigure pushed to the top. THE BUILD / ZOOM IN moved right, above the callouts. Collar dot now sits on the collar between the toggles. 03 renamed tapered laser-cut cuffs and lifted off the bottom.
RemovedThe macro panel (collar / pocket / cuff) and the "Form-fitting. Not restricting." band.
DesignHeadline kept. Copy is one line: Colors stay as sharp and as vibrant as the day it shipped.
LedgerPro Series Fight Shorts added to wears-with.
Open the live email Download html + assets

The other two

round 3, for reference

Kept as built in round 3. Neither carries the round-4 copy changes.

Option A
A · The LineupPurpose statement leads, front and back duo. Open A
Option B
B · The WordmarkOversized MOMENTUM behind the duo. Open B

Still open before Mailchimp

Unchanged.

  1. Virginia Tech. Clear to show a customer’s decorated kit in a broadcast email?
  2. Fabric spec. Catalogue lists it as "TBD, confirm with production", so no weight or content claim is made.
  3. Sizes. Catalogue says Adult XS–3XL / Youth S–L; the snippet bank says "Youth XS – Adult 4XL". The email uses the catalogue.
  4. SKUs 112080 / 212080 / 312080 are flagged "New — needs sign-off".
  5. CTA targets. Both buttons go to /custom-quote/; the text link goes to /2026-style-guide/. UTMs on 26_momentum_hoodie.